Mal ([info]malnpudl) wrote,
@ 2008-04-28 21:40:00
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SGA Fic: With Good Grace (John/Rodney, PG-13)
Title: With Good Grace
Author: malnpudl
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing: John/Rodney
Length: ~950 words
Disclaimer: Stargate Atlantis and its characters belong to MGM, Double Secret, Gekko, and others who aren't me. No copyright infringement is intended. This is just for fun, not for profit.

Acknowledgements: Many thanks to [info]isiscolo and [info]sageness, two of the best betas a writer could ever hope to find.

Dedication: For [info]beadattitude who was having a lost zebra day.

Notes: Two of my biggest bulletproof kinks are realism and happily ever afters. Put the two in a blender, set the time machine for 20+ years in the future, and this is what happens.

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With Good Grace


John still has most of his hair, though it's gone silver at the temples and the rest is more gray than not these days, as is the sweat-damp hair on his chest and arms, bright against his deeply tanned skin under the warm California sun. Rodney used to resent that, as he watched his own hairline recede out of sight, but now he just enjoys it. Even in his sixties, John is still beautiful.

John's deck chair is reclined to half-mast and PJ is stretched out on his side in the shade beneath it, panting gently. His eyes are soft and dark against his golden fur, and his open mouth and lolling tongue make him look like he's laughing silently.

"Silly mutt," Rodney murmurs. PJ's tail thumps once in agreement against the silvering cedar boards of the deck.

Rodney still wishes they could have retired on Atlantis, but they'd found that neither he nor John was able to sit idly by when things went to hell – as they still did, reliably, at least twice a week on average. He never stops missing home like all holy hell, but he figures if they had to end up back on Earth, Santa Barbara is a good choice. They're right on the ocean, and the breezes smell a lot like home.

His eyes still closed against the afternoon sun, John reaches out and gropes blindly for his beer, nearly toppling the bottle before Rodney rescues it and slips it into John's hand. John raises it to his lips and drains it, his head tilting back, sweat trickling slowly down his throat as he swallows.

"Thanks," John says, plunking the empty bottle down on the deck beside his chair. He cracks an eyelid and turns his head to look at Rodney. "Hungry?" he asks.

Rodney grins. "Aren't I always?" He levers himself slowly out of his deck chair, his joints popping like a string of firecrackers. It's the left shoulder that's giving him the most trouble at the moment; dislocations heal (this one three times; the right only once), but they're never quite the same again. Not too bad; today's a good day, his body sun-baked and limber as it ever gets any more, and he gets to his feet with little difficulty.

Beside him, John is stretching his legs, one at a time, the first step in the slow and careful process of getting up out of his chair.

"Ready?" Rodney asks, and John nods. Rodney bends down and lowers the deck chair's footrest until John's feet are flat on the sun-warmed wood of the deck. Prosthetic technology is so good these days that if it weren't for the fact that synthetic skin doesn't tan, he'd have a hard time telling the artificial one (land mine four years ago; that planet with the six moons) from the real one.

John is still remarkably lean, gone spare and sinewy as he ages; somehow he's managed to avoid the spreading waistline that has padded Rodney's own middle, though his skin is no longer firm and taut. Rodney teases him about his wrinkles, but he secretly loves the crepe-soft, delicate feel of them under his fingers and against his lips.

John has finished the ritual stretching of his back, punctuated by soft grunts and groans that are remarkably reminiscent of the sounds he makes when they're having sex. John's right shoulder (gunshot; Genii), left hip (thrown out of a window on that planet with the tentacle creatures), and both knees (boot to the kneecap in a fight; bad fall down a mountainside) have been replaced and are blessedly free from pain, but nobody has yet figured out how to replace a spine (way too many fights and falls on too many worlds to count).

"Okay," John says finally, and reaches out with both hands. He and Rodney grab each other's wrists, and Rodney braces himself while John pulls himself to his feet. They've been doing this so long, it's automatic; Rodney has to stop himself from absent-mindedly offering the same assistance to their occasional houseguests.

On his feet now, John keeps tugging gently at Rodney's wrists until the two of them are chest to chest, releasing Rodney only to wrap his arms around Rodney's torso. "Hi," John says, and rests his chin on Rodney's shoulder.

Rodney's arms reach easily around John's waist, meeting at his knobby spine. "Hi, yourself," he says, smiling despite himself. "You're all sweaty."

"Yeah," John says, leaning back just enough to smile into Rodney's eyes. "So are you. Wanna fuck?"

When they first got together, Rodney feared his heart would burst, because surely nothing so frail as flesh could possibly contain all the love he felt for John. It never happened, even though the love has just kept growing through the years, spreading inward and outward, exponential. Love, Rodney has concluded, is the only thing in the universe that defies the laws of physics.

"I thought you were hungry," he says, and his eyes drift closed as he leans in to kiss John's mouth, warm and welcoming as always.

John takes his time, soft lips and tongue and sweet, dark sounds from deep in his throat. He leaves Rodney's mouth at last with a soft, lingering bite on his lower lip, and his smile makes wicked promises. "I am," he says. "But I have my priorities straight."

"Sex now?" Rodney says. He automatically slips a shoulder under John's arm for support as they turn slowly, carefully toward the sliding door.

"Food later," John agrees. PJ's tags jingle as he gets to his feet and gives himself a shake. His nails tap a soft, slow staccato as he follows them into the coolness within the thick stucco walls of their house.


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[info]nightdog_barks
2008-04-29 04:49 am UTC (link)
This is so lovely.

... nothing so frail as flesh ...

Best five words ever in a fic. Really, really beautiful.

*mems, because this is something I want to come back to*

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:34 am UTC (link)
Oh, thank you so much! That's the loveliest compliment. :-D

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[info]equusentric
2008-04-29 04:58 am UTC (link)
I love growing old together fics, and this is absolutely wonderful. ♥

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:34 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much. This was a happy one to write. :-)

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[info]thriftstoredesk
2008-04-29 05:03 am UTC (link)
crepe-soft, delicate feel
That is SO perfect.

I love everything about this. Rodney and John are both in character yet have mellowed with age. Definitely adding this to my memories.

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:35 am UTC (link)
I'm so pleased that you liked that line. :-)

Thank you! I'm honored to be on the reread list.

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[info]jackluvsdaniel
2008-04-29 05:07 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is beautiful! <3

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:35 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much. :-)

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[info]saena17
2008-04-29 05:09 am UTC (link)
Love, Rodney has concluded, is the only thing in the universe that defies the laws of physics.

Oh, how sweet. <3 I love the gentle tone and beautiful wording in this, as well as the wonderfulness of these boys loving each other into old age. Lovely story. ;)

Sarah

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:36 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! This was a real "heart fic" for me, so I'm very happy to hear that it's making other people happy. :-)

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[info]kanzenhanzai
2008-04-29 05:51 am UTC (link)
Both the story itself and the words you chose are absolutely lovely ♥

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:37 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! It's such a glorious thing to have the words flowing again. :-)

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[info]green_grrl
2008-04-29 05:54 am UTC (link)
*adores* So sweet and beautiful!

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:38 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm delighted that you liked it. :-)

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[info]gillianinoz
2008-04-29 06:26 am UTC (link)
Ahh, lovely and very very satisfying. I adore the idea of them as two old guys together, counting their war wounds and enjoying their retirement.

:-)

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:41 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I love thinking of them growing old together. I'm glad so many people feel the same. :-)

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[info]lysambre
2008-04-29 06:58 am UTC (link)
Oh this is beautiful, I love when they are old and still happy together :).

And I love Rodney's description of his love for John :)

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:43 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! Heaven knows they've earned a happily ever after. :-)

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[info]_divya_
2008-04-29 06:59 am UTC (link)
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:44 am UTC (link)
*beams*

*hearts you liek woah*

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[info]bluebrocade
2008-04-29 07:08 am UTC (link)
You wrote SGA! ♥

I love this so much. John gone all silver-haired...them knowing each other so well after so many years together...*melts*

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:45 am UTC (link)
I did! *happyflail* :-D

Thank you so much. I made myself sort of melty with this one; glad to hear it was contagious. :-)

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[info]mystisblom
2008-04-29 07:21 am UTC (link)
I love the two as old men, still in love :)

You wrote a lovely story, thanks.

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:46 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! The best loves just grow deeper and truer with the passage of time. I like to think that's what they have together. :-)

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[info]larauwen
2008-04-29 07:45 am UTC (link)
I love how they still think of Atlantis as home, but that they can be happy anyway.

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:47 am UTC (link)
Yeah, I first tried to set this on Atlantis, but they wouldn't stay retired. Two old warhorses. Their pasture needs to be a long, long way from the track, or they'll never enjoy their well-earned rest.

Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it. :-)

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[info]bluespirit_star
2008-04-29 08:02 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is just perfect.
They're older & still together, they're happy & safe - & they have a dog!! ♥
Absolutely wonderful - thank you.

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:49 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! And I just couldn't see John without a dog to share his walks on the beach. I like to think that Rodney's cat was snoozing inside the house, too sensible to be out there in the hot sun. :-)

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[info]muck_a_luck
2008-04-29 08:45 am UTC (link)
I loved this. Shep and McKay as old wrinklies in love. :D

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:49 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

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[info]shihadchick
2008-04-29 09:44 am UTC (link)
oh, this is BEAUTIFUL, Mal. the tone and feel of it all is just so clear and lovely and ngggh, my HEART.

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:56 am UTC (link)
Oh, yay! Thank you so much! I'm glad it made you all heart-happy. :-)

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[info]secondalto
2008-04-29 10:01 am UTC (link)
Absolutely gorgeous. A wonderful read first thing in the morning.

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 12:58 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm glad I could help get your day off to a good start. :-)

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[info]mary_russell11
2008-04-29 10:04 am UTC (link)
such a lovely story! and I see they still have their priorities straight(no pun intended*g*)-sex first, food second*g* if they ended up like this, it would be a great ending for them...beautiful. you did good*pats you on the shoulder*

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 01:01 am UTC (link)
Hee! A commitment to a great sex life can only aid in the longevity of a relationship, don't you think? *g*

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

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[info]danceswithgary
2008-04-29 10:28 am UTC (link)
My heart just melted in the good way.

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 01:02 am UTC (link)
Awwww. *happy sappy grin*

Thank you so much! :-)

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[info]ariadne83
2008-04-29 10:33 am UTC (link)
I love the way you just casually throw in all the old injuries. It really helps to show the passage of time, and it's very IC because there's no way these two would've agreed to be desk-bound until they had to be

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 01:03 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! And yeah, these two wouldn't take to retirement easily, not if and where they still felt needed. I first tried setting this in Atlantis, but it just didn't work. :-)

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[info]akite
2008-04-29 11:10 am UTC (link)
That was lovely. I loved Rodney's joints popping when he got up. Mine make that sound too sometimes, not as bad as a string of firecrackers yet, but I'm sure it's just a matter of time. *g*

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 01:04 am UTC (link)
Ain't it just the way? But growing older is so much easier when it's shared with someone dear. :-)

Thanks so much!

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[info]wesleysgirl
2008-04-29 11:29 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is beautiful.

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 01:04 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :-)

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[info]spikedluv
2008-04-29 12:13 pm UTC (link)
Awww, that was sweet and beautiful. Love future!fic, where the guys are still together. Fantastic detail, and this bit, They've been doing this so long, it's automatic; Rodney has to stop himself from absent-mindedly offering the same assistance to their occasional houseguests. made me laugh.

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 01:06 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked that bit; it made me smile, too. :-)

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[info]melagan
2008-04-29 12:16 pm UTC (link)
I love seeing them grow old together and this is lovely

..but he secretly loves the crepe-soft, delicate feel of them under his fingers and against his lips.

*happy sigh*

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 01:06 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! And I'm especially pleased that you liked that image. That makes me very happy. :-)

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[info]tesserae_
2008-04-29 12:43 pm UTC (link)
Oh, this is lovely, and the sense you create of the sun, the deck, the dog, the love they share - marvelous...

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[info]malnpudl
2008-04-30 01:08 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! The lovely and talented [info]sageness shares credit for the sensory detail; she's always so very good at reminding me about the need to build a sense of place. :-)

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