Mal ([info]malnpudl) wrote,
@ 2005-03-22 19:37:00
Previous Entry  Add to memories!  Tell a Friend!  Next Entry
Current mood:schmoopy

Alias Smith & Jones ficlet: Comfort (NC-17)
Where this came from I have no idea, nor do I have any clue whether anyone on my flist is likely to want to read it. But after tonight's AS&J ep this little thing damn near wrote itself, so by god, here it is; make of it what you will.

Unbeta'd, I'm afraid, since I have no clue where to look for a beta in this fandom.

Title: Comfort
Author: malnpudl
Rating: NC-17 / FRAO
Pairing: Heyes/Curry
Summary: Just a bit of smut and comfort. Episode tag for "The Fifth Victim".
Warnings: Slash (graphic m/m sex) and het. Please do not read if this type of story offends you.
Disclaimer: Alias Smith & Jones and its characters belong to Universal TV, ABC, Studios USA Television, and/or other folks who aren't me. This is just for fun, not for profit. No copyright infringement is intended.
Feedback: Would be delightful.
Distribution: Anybody want it? Really?
Author’s Notes: My first ASJ fic. Concrit or other feedback very much welcome.

ETA: Now with two pictures, for those of you who don't know the show and might be curious. Hannibal Heyes is the dark-haired guy in the black hat; Kid Curry is the curly-haired blond in the brown hat. Aren't they pretty? *g*



* * *

I shifted inside my bedroll, turning my face to the fire and pulling the blanket tighter around me, trying to get warm enough to fall asleep.

"Hey, Kid." It was Heyes, sounding drowsy.

"Yeah?"

"S'cold."

He didn't usually complain, and I wondered how much his head wound was still paining him. It was awfully soon after the shooting for him to be traveling on horseback and sleeping out on the trail.

"C'mere," I said, and scooted toward him, my blanket lifted in invitation. He moved himself and his bedroll next to me and we made ourselves snug under both blankets. It was a lot warmer immediately, and I felt bad for not having offered sooner.

Heyes shoved gently at my shoulder. "Roll over," he mumbled, and then wrapped himself around my back when I complied. The position always seemed to comfort him when things were really rough. Another sign that I should've offered sooner, and I felt guilty for not realizing it.

"So how'd you figure it all out?" he asked. I could feel the warmth of his lips through my shirt, moving against my shoulder.

"All what? You mean who was shooting all the poker players?"

"Mm-hm. And why."

I smiled into the night. "Well, a lot of the credit goes to Helen."

I could feel Heyes grin against my back. "Helen? Should've known there'd be a woman involved."

"Isn't there always?" Heyes burrowed one cold hand underneath my shirt and plastered it against my belly, seeking body heat. "Damn, that's cold!"

"Won't be for long," he said, and I could hear the smile in his voice. "Tell me about Helen."

"Ah, the lovely Helen," I said. "Pretty as the day is long, with a figure that would stop traffic in St. Louis. She's the one told me about Harvey and Mrs. Carlson."

"Ah. And how'd you get that little nugget out of her?"

"You expect me to kiss and tell?"

"Don't you always?"

I did, of course, and so did he. It's what we did. We shared everything else; this was our way of sharing the one thing we couldn't actually do together.

"Well, she took me up to bed and we kissed for a while, and we talked for a while, and then we kissed some more."

"She a good kisser?"

"The best. Slow and soft and sweet, just the way I like it. Not in too big a hurry to get to the rest, but you don't mind because you know the rest is coming soon enough."

He made a contented noise deep in his throat and burrowed closer to me. His hand on my belly was a lot warmer now, and his face against my shoulder didn't feel cold through my shirt. I felt better, knowing that he was warm enough. "Then what?"

"Well, once we'd finished with the talking part of things, it got more interesting. She got up and undressed for me... did it real slow, put on a little show for me. She's got the prettiest tits you ever did see, big and round and soft, with these sweet little pink nipples..."

"Oh, yeah," he murmured, and I could feel him start to swell and harden against my ass.

I smiled. "She loved having me suck on 'em, made these little soft, hungry noises like a pup calling for its mama. Wouldn't let me stop playing with 'em while she undressed me."

"What happened next?" he whispered, pressing his hard cock against my ass.

I rolled over and looked into his eyes, glowing soft and bright in the firelight. "She took all my clothes off," I said, and reached for his cock, stroking it through his trousers.

He gasped softly. "Kid!" he murmured. "Yes."

I opened his fly and freed his cock so I could touch him skin to skin. He thrust gently into my welcoming hand, and I stroked my fingers up and down the shaft with a teasing touch. "Then she touched me, just like this, just like I'm touching you now."

He made a hungry noise then, a much deeper version of the sounds Helen had made when I'd made love to her, and it stirred me every bit as much.

"What'd her pussy look like, Kid?"

"Pretty as a flower, Heyes," I said. He had his eyes closed so he could imagine everything I was telling him, and I loved watching the passion light up his expressive face. "She had a little patch of honey blonde hair, soft as silk and it smelled so sweet."

He groaned and arched up, pushing his cock into my hand. "God, Kid. Oh, god. Did you taste her?"

Smiling, I nodded, even though I knew he couldn't see me. "Oh, yeah. And did she ever love that! Whimpered and wriggled and begged me for more. She came for me twice that way, and she tasted sweet as honey when she did."

He was breathing harder now. "What next? Did you fuck her?"

"Nope."

He stilled and opened his eyes, looked at me. "No?"

"Nope." I shook my head. "That's 'cause she said she it was her turn to find out what I tasted like." His cock pulsed in my hand, and I scooted down under the blanket. "Just like I'm gonna do to you right now." And I took him into my mouth.

His hands moved to my head, stroked through my hair, and I could feel him start to tremble. "Oh, Kid," he breathed. "Oh... yes. Just like that. Just like that."

I loved the feel of him in my mouth, so responsive under my tongue, loved feeling every pulse and swell as his pleasure built. The sound of his desire was music to me, his soft gasps and hot, hungry whispers against the snapping of the fire.

I lifted my head. "Come for me," I told him softly. "Let me taste you." And I sucked him into the wet heat of my mouth again.

"Oh, Kid, god, yes!" he whispered, his breathing fast and shallow, and the hoarse desperation in his voice made my own cock swell iron hard. "God, Kid, oh god I'm... oh... oh, now yes now..."

He came in my mouth, pulsing wildly, filling me with himself; I drank it all down, took him inside me. I tongued him softly, bathing and caressing him, telling him without words what he meant to me and always would. My hands softly stroked his chest, gentling him down like a high strung colt, coming to rest over his heart.

I lifted my head and crawled back up beside him, and he took me in his arms.

"Warmer now?" I asked as I tucked him back into his trousers and fastened his fly.

"Yeah." He smiled at me, and I could see his heart shining softly in his heavy-lidded eyes. "Your turn?"

My cock was still hard in my pants, but I shook my head. "Not tonight," I said. "It'll keep. You rest now, get some sleep."

He was already half asleep, and he curled himself around me, tucked his face in against my neck. "Okay," he murmured. "Night, Kid."

I held him close, my partner, my friend. My heart, though he'd laugh himself silly if he ever heard me say it. I'd come too close to losing him this time, and all I wanted to do was hold him to me and feel him breathe, feel the beating of his heart, vital and alive. "Night, Heyes," I whispered. "Sleep well."

A soft snoring was all that met my words.

~ fin ~




(Post a new comment)


[info]lostgirlslair
2005-03-23 04:24 am UTC (link)
That was beautiful, sweetie. Wonderfully written, soft and peaceful. Amazing job!

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-23 05:23 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I love it when a story almost writes itself.

I don't know if you've ever seen this show, but there's more pure sweetness between these two guys than anybody but Dan & Casey on Sports Night. I'm always finding myself so struck by the love and joy in Heyes eyes when he looks at the Kid. Makes the schmoop inevitable, at least for me.

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a very happy thing to write.

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]lostgirlslair
2005-03-23 05:26 am UTC (link)
Nope, never seen it. I only read it because it was you writing slash and how could I resist THAT? ::laughs:: :-) It's very sweet, but honestly? It's too well written for what I consider schmoop. Not that I don't like schmoop, mind you, but schmoop to me is . . . extreme, almost (and somtimes way past almost ::laughs::) to the point of being unbelieveable. Now, I've never seen the show, but I found the fic itself entirely believable.

Hmmm. I'm not sure that made sense, but I promise it's a compliment. ;-)

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-23 06:04 am UTC (link)
*g* Now that's a lovely testimonial.

I've updated the original post to add a couple of pictures of the guys, just in case anyone's curious. They're so pretty. :-D

Speaking of my slash and shows you've probably never seen, did you catch my NCIS smutficlet, or was that when you were offline and immersed in writing? Don't feel obligated to read it, since it's not one of your fandoms, but if you want a short bit of pure porn some time, you might enjoy it. Gibbs (played by Mark Harmon) is a hard-bitten ex-Marine; Tony DiNozzo is one of the agents on his NCIS team, about 15 years younger and as cute as he is hot. (See icon. Drool.)

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]lostgirlslair
2005-03-23 06:11 am UTC (link)
::laughs:: I'm glad it made sense!

No, I haven't read it! But there's a good chance I might. I'm kinda not writey tonight and reading is very good. Reading porn? Even better. Especially since I'm looking through male nudes for Giles manipping purposes (And can I say most of these guys work out way too much? ::shudders::). I think I have seen NCIS. ::thinks:: Um, I'm not sure I liked it. I think I found myself rolling my eyes at some of it, in fact. ::looks sheepish:: That doesn't, however, preclude me liking the slash! ::is such a perv:: But, you take an older guy and a younger guy and write porn about them together and . . . yay, I'm a perv. Thanks for pointing me toward it, sweetie!

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]surreallis
2005-03-23 11:43 am UTC (link)
Well now if they'd had THAT in the show... :p

That was incredibly hot. I don't know why I find slash mixed with het to be so damn irresistable. I loved both the Kid and Hannibal in it too. Because the Kid SO would kiss and tell, and Hannibal SO would enjoy it. *sigh*

And you didn't even make a joke about Kid being the "fastest gun in the West". heeheehee

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-23 05:36 pm UTC (link)
That woulda been some show, now wouldn't it? *g*

I don't know why I find slash mixed with het to be so damn irresistable.

There is something potent about it, isn't there? I like the inclusiveness of it, I think. BTW, I'm still mentally working on the S/J/D pornlet I tried and failed to write for your birthday; it's not dead, so don't give up hope. One of these days... weeks... months. ;-)

And you didn't even make a joke about Kid being the "fastest gun in the West". heeheehee

*snicker*

Glad you liked.

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]surreallis
2005-03-24 12:33 am UTC (link)
Ohh! If there is anyway I can urge that S/J/D fic out of you, just let me know. (Umm... maybe some Gibbs/DiNozzo fluff?) Stargate OT3 just makes me droool.

And I came home from work and read this little fic again because I really, really adored this show years ago. I could very easily slash these two in fic. And I'm a bit surprised at how much I loved reading it to tell you the truth. Interesting. Feel free to write more anytime. ;)

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-24 07:00 am UTC (link)
Ohh! If there is anyway I can urge that S/J/D fic out of you, just let me know. (Umm... maybe some Gibbs/DiNozzo fluff?) Stargate OT3 just makes me droool.

I was hung up for a while because I couldn't find the right hook to hang it on. Sure, I had three people having sex, nice (or nasty) as you please, but the emotion was shallow and there was nothing to pull it all together and make me care about them and the story. Since Threads, though, I think I might have a way to make it work. Gotta see if anybody's got an ep transcript up yet. Anyway, there's hope. Don't give up on me. :-)

But I'll never, ever say no to a little Gibbs/DiNozzo fluff. Or Gibbs/DiNozzo anything else, for that matter. *g* Lord, but I adore those two guys. (And the whole show, for that matter, more all the time.)

And I came home from work and read this little fic again because I really, really adored this show years ago. I could very easily slash these two in fic. And I'm a bit surprised at how much I loved reading it to tell you the truth. Interesting. Feel free to write more anytime. ;)

AS&J has remarkable staying power, doesn't it? Since the Encore Westerns channel started showing it this year, I've fallen for the show and the guys all over again. I'd love to write more in the fandom, but I never know when a story idea is going to hit me -- it's far from fertile ground for such things around here -- and I was astonished when this one more or less wrote itself out of the blue. Could happen again some day; who knows? *g*

I'm so delighted that you liked the fic that much. Really warms my li'l heart. :-)

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]tx_cronopio
2005-03-23 12:51 pm UTC (link)
Ah, yes! Nicely done. This show was the source of my very earliest slash fantasies.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-23 05:37 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

And I can definitely appreciate that. There's so much obvious love between the guys -- at least between Pete Duel's Heyes and the Kid, if not so much with Roger Davis's Heyes -- whether or not you see it as slashy, the sweetness and devotion and joy in each other can't be missed.

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]tx_cronopio
2005-03-23 07:07 pm UTC (link)
How are you watching it? I cannot find that a DVD is out yet, or is it running on TV somewhere? That's a DVD I'd buy in a heartbeat!

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-23 07:15 pm UTC (link)
I know what you mean; I'd buy this show on DVD so fast it'd make your head spin if only they'd ever offer it.

It's currently running every weekday at 5pm (Pacific time, at least; don't know about other time zones) on the Encore Westerns channel. With my Cox digital cable, it's part of one of those cheapie movie packages that includes IFC, Sundance, Lifetime Movies, that sort of thing for only a few bucks more a month.

They've been through the whole series once already and then started over from the beginning again around a week or so ago. It's remarkable how well it's held up. I didn't expect much from it, given when it was made, but I've fallen in love with the guys and with the show all over again. :-)

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]jedi_penguin
2005-03-23 04:05 pm UTC (link)
I haven't seen that show in almost twenty years but I remember loving it. If that had been in it, I would have loved it even more! *grin*

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-23 05:38 pm UTC (link)
That would definitely have been an eye-opener, now wouldn't it? *g*

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]pat_t
2005-03-23 04:09 pm UTC (link)
Well, I said I could see them together this way *g*

Very nice and I liked the way you worked it from the show. It made it more believable to me. Do you see them as just friends who care about one another and giving comfort, or do you see their relationship as having the potential to become more?

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-23 05:46 pm UTC (link)
Well, I said I could see them together this way *g*

I was thinking about your comments while I wrote this; that was a significant part of the inspiration, in fact. For which, thanks. :-)

Do you see them as just friends who care about one another and giving comfort, or do you see their relationship as having the potential to become more?

I see them as best friends and... soulmates, I guess, is the only word that I can come up with. I think they love each other more than they ever have or ever will love anyone else, but I don't think either of them see it as romantic, nor ever will. I can easily imagine either or both of them falling in love with a woman and getting married and settling down, but I can't imagine them living very far from each other or being happy or at peace without the other one close by.

I don't know if you ever watched Sports Night, but I really do see Heyes and Curry in much the same way I do Dan and Casey, with the same soul-deep love and sweetness and devotion between them. Lovely stuff.

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]simonesa
2005-03-24 05:31 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much. Great story. I hope you will write more as&j fic. Such a neglected fandom. I totally agree about the bond between the guys. I hope this recent showing on starz westerns will bring in more fans.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-24 07:04 am UTC (link)
Your icon!!! *adores it* :-D

Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I'm so glad to hear you liked the story; it was a very happy thing to write.

I'm astonished there's not more ASJ fic out there. I don't get story ideas very often, and when I do they may be in any of half a dozen fandoms, so I never know what I'm likely to write next. But I very much hope that another ASJ plot bunny will come along some day. I love the guys a lot, and they're a joy to write. :-)

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]simonesa
2005-03-24 09:12 am UTC (link)
Your icon!!! *adores it* :-D

When I saw that screen grab with Curry's hand on Heyes' knee, I nearly fell out of my chair. But credit where credit is due, [info]abelladonna made the icon for me. And this one too. :-D

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]dopeydora_67
2005-03-24 08:39 am UTC (link)
That was lovely, and well written. Would love to read more like that.

Cathy

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-26 03:16 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :-)

I'm not a prolific writer by any means, and I never know when I'll get hit with another story idea, but I hope that I'll end up writing ASJ again one of these days. This was a happy one to write.

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]lovekeller
2005-03-24 01:36 pm UTC (link)
Here by way of [info]simonesa

Very happy to have stopped by. Love the idea of them sharing everything but, then sharing that too. Very hot.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2005-03-26 03:16 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much for your lovely feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

(Reply to this) (Parent)

ASJ story
(Anonymous)
2005-03-24 06:30 pm UTC (link)
Hot story, thanks for sharing. There just isn't enough writers in this fandom... I certainly see the boys being more than friends/cousins/partners.. They are one in heart, soul and body.. why not comfort each other anyway they can.. : )
Rebel

(Reply to this) (Thread)

Re: ASJ story
[info]malnpudl
2005-03-26 03:18 am UTC (link)
Thanks much for your feedback. I'm so pleased to hear that you enjoyed the story.

And I know what you mean; more fic in this fandom would be a lovely thing. :-)

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

Re: ASJ story
[info]kassidy62
2005-03-26 03:18 pm UTC (link)
I'm like you. I watched the show as a kid and was very upset to find that Pete Duel had killed himself. Now I'm back into the show with a vengeance.

I'm one of those people who like slash but rarely writes it. I've never thought of the boys this way but this story is so sweet and giving. Makes me feel warm inside. I know, I know, a lot of folks don't like that word 'sweet', but it has its place as a compliment. You got to the heart of their feelings for each other and showed them to us. That's what makes it special.

I was doing this vid I talked about over on the Yahoo group and it it Heyes throws a very coquettish look at the Kid. When you see the video, I'd be curious to know if you spot it:) Doing vids, you really become aware of certain gestures and expressions one character gives the other.

Which reminds me of some interviews Ben Murphy gave. For the most part, he has been reluctant to discuss Pete's suicide but I think maybe as he got older he opened up a bit. He said he knew at the time that his and Pete Duel's chemistry was special and that a part of him knew this was perhaps the pinnacle of his career. He also talked about how, years after the suicide, he was on a date and watching a movie wherein someone died and he found himself out in the car, sobbing his eyes out as memories overcame him. He said that to this day he thinks of Pete often and wishes he could just run into him and reminisce, like he has done with Roger.

Anytime you want to post more stories, I'll be there;)

Kass

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]china_shop
2006-05-29 11:37 am UTC (link)
Oh that was just lovely. *adores* Now I'm doubly -- maybe triply -- eager to revisit the show. :)

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2006-05-29 06:14 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I really see the love between these guys (or at least between Curry and Pete Deuel's Heyes; not so much once Roger Davis took on the Heyes role). Yeah, they snark on each other, but the bond is so visibly evident -- enough that it makes me wonder if Pete Deuel was gay (or if he was just that good an actor, I don't know); you can see so much shining in his eyes some times when he looks at the Kid.

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]_unhurt_
2006-06-23 09:10 pm UTC (link)
*happy sigh*

that totally fits with the (tiny bit - three maybe? eps) of the show i've seen. they're such partners - they really feel like they do the sharing everything thing.

pete duel makes me sad though. poor guy.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2006-08-30 06:59 am UTC (link)
Eep! I just discovered that I never replied to your lovely feedback! *facepalms*

Thank you so much! :-D

I adore this show. There's such visible love and affection between Pete Deuel's Heyes and the Kid. It just shines.

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]rodneyscat
2006-08-25 05:33 pm UTC (link)
Oh dear... I came here for Wilby Wonderful and end up reading Alias Smith and Jones; I clearly need to rummage around your livejournal some more!!

Back in the day I was always fantasizing myself in Heyes' arms, but now I prefer him like this. Adorable pics too by the way, especially the last one. Lovely, warm story *happy sigh*

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2006-08-30 06:58 am UTC (link)
It's such a delightful surprise, getting feedback on an old story. Thank you so much! You've made my day. :-)

I love this show a lot, and have ever since it first aired. Pete Deuel's Heyes was one of my first crushes. I've been enjoying the reruns on the Encore Westerns channel a lot, and just keep hoping they'll bring it out on DVD some day. It's held up remarkably well. And I've also discovered the considerable charms of Ben Murphy's Kid Curry, something I'd overlooked in my youth when I was busy being dazzled by Heyes. *g*

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]jaekayelle
2007-03-11 08:00 pm UTC (link)
Mmm This was lovely. Ordinarily, I'd say there was a bit too much het that helped get them both all fired up, but we see in canon that they do like women so in this story it works. Especially since Kid went to bed with Helen and then told Heyes all about it. ;) Also, I love how their obvious affection, again -- canonical, for each other shines through. They love each other on many levels, which is one of the main draws of the show and the pairing, no matter how a viewer ultimately sees them.

They are both so easy in this fic. (Not like that! *g*) I mean they're comfortable with each other, they don't angst over the sex with each other -- they just go with it. Kid gives Heyes what he needs because Kid wants to comfort him. They've done it before, but I think their first time could be equally as stress free as this was. Sweet! And Hot!

I could just hug this story. *g*

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2007-03-14 04:27 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

The het in this story is pretty much canon; the Kid did spend some time with her -- in her bedroom -- and it was pretty clear (at least as clear as this show ever gets) that they were intimate.

But what stood out so dramatically for me in this ep was that while the Kid may have had sex with Helen and even thoroughly enjoyed her company, it wasn't until he was with Heyes again that you saw his heart shining in his eyes. Those two boys just love each other so much. I can't resist the sweetness between them.

Thanks again for your lovely feedback. :-)

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]kylielee1000
2007-05-08 10:08 pm UTC (link)
Okay, I haven't even seen the show and yet this is hotter than hot. Thanks for the tip to come on over and read, and I'll come back and revisit it after I see the ep this is a tag to.

Mrowr! I love the het mixed in with the slash, the idea that there may be women, but they are tangential to their relationship.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]malnpudl
2007-05-09 06:58 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much! I hadn't reread this story in ages, and it was nice to discover that I'm still pretty pleased with it. This fandom, and the relationship between the two guys, lends itself to a degree of schmoop that would make me uncomfortable in any other fandom.

I hope you enjoy the show. They're such lovely boys. :-)

(Reply to this) (Parent)


Create an Account
Forgot your login or password?
Login w/ OpenID
English • Español • Deutsch • Русский…